Thursday, 30 April 2020

the disappering world

As they were in the water they had a big crash then they got stuck on land. They were trying to push the boat but it was too heavy for them to push the boat and then they gave up because they knew they were stuck forever and ever. Then they had to hunt for there food and water, and it was even worse because the world was disappearing bit by bit and it started from where they were and so they ran for their lives because it was disappearing very fast,and then they keep running for a long time then they wanted to stop but they couldn't because their were 1 meter away from it.They stop because there was a huge gape in the middle of nowhere so they tried to jump but all fell and then they stop in the river but they had to just go with it and there was a water fall was 100 foot drop then they fell and then they tried to stop but they just fell down it.THE END RICHEE
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3 comments:

  1. Mrs Haines30 April 2020 at 12:05

    I wonder where they disappeared to? Maybe that could be the next part of the story?

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  2. Nicole Mills1 May 2020 at 13:23

    Great writing, Richee. What wow words could you use to make it even better? Think about how you could describe what you are seeing. e.g. Slowly, everything started to disintegrate and faded into the setting sun.

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  3. Anonymous19 May 2020 at 09:14

    Cool story!

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