23.9.20
The little girl packed her bags to go to school then when she reach to the zipline there was a massive fire that was at the lake.She was to scared to go over it because it was getting higher by the minute so she just went then got stuck so she tried wiggling but it did not work so she just let her self burn. !!!!! By Richee
Hola Richee I like how intese the story becomes as it progressed, but it was a bit hard to understand where locations just come out of nowhere...
ReplyDeleteWhat would you do in a fire?
adios amigos,-Arlo
Hi, my name is Leah from Otaki college and I think that this post is really good.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Ondreous and I go to Paihia School.
ReplyDeleteI like your post about My Fantastic Writing because it had a picture and it was really interesting to read . One of my cousins has posted a similar post about a zip line before as well . Have you been on a zip line before? Keep up the good work!
Kia Ora Richee I’m Archie from Paihia School.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your blog post about how you would get to school in the most creative way. I liked your idea of using a zipline to get to school, that would be very fun and excitingl. Have you ever been on a zipline before? Keep up the great work!!
Hi Richee, This story is very exciting and nerve racking. Thank you for sharing your learning . Blog ya later
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