Angry Wolf Blows Down Pig House
The 3 little pigs a big bad wolf
Yesterday at 2.58 a big bad wolf saw new pigs in town building their house next to each other. Bob the pig said yesterday at 4.20 that when he walked through the woods he saw the wolf looking at him his brother george and his sister crystal.He was frightened but he did not want to tell his bro and sis that there was a pig because it might come after them.So they all found there spots started to build.Bob the pig finished building his house out of straw then the wolf waited for his brother and sister to finished.20 minutes later the 2 pigs finally finished building there and went to go and blow bob straw house down when it happen bob forgot about the wolf forgot that his house was not wolf proof and the wolf came and blowed it down then bob ran for is life and went his brother stick house to tell him.George part.When George got told from his brother that there a wolf he said to bob that his house his not woof proof then bob said don't worry this has nails in it the george said okay.Then the hungry wolf knock on the door and said open the gorge said no then the wolf huff and puff and blowed his brother house down the 2 pigs ran to there sister brick and clay house they both told there sister that there is a wolf and blowed both of there house down.Cyrstal said don’t worry this is made of bricks and clay they said is it wolf proof she yes.And she locked all the doors and windows then she put a hot boiling pot of water incase the wolf went in the chimney.So the 3 little pigs was not letting him in so he climbed the chimney and jump down into the hot boiling water then he jumped up and ran to the lake to cool his but down.20 minutes later the police are finally here and arrested the wolf.As they took the wolf away he said when i am out i am coming for you.But the 3 little pigs said he is back in town but he is on a meat diet.The end
Hi Richee! My name is Lyla I am a year 7 at Otaki college. This is really cool what you have wrote. It looks like you spent a long time on this and I bet you are proud of it. Have a great day! From Lyla.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Richee, my name is Mikaila and I am a year seven student from Paihia School. I really liked your writing because it is easy and clear to read and to understand. I thought we done something simalar because I have written about the three little pigs before in Te Ngahere during lock down. I enjoyed reading your writing because it was interesting and funny to read. I think you should add paragraphs next time. Have you Written another version before?
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Ondreous and I go to Paihia School.
ReplyDeleteI liked your post about The Three Little Pigs and the Big Bad Wolf because it was really interesting to read , and had of information. I have also written a story about The Three Little Pigs last year with my friends. Do you like reading facts about animals? Keep up the good work!